Sunday, August 17, 2014

The Fall by Corbin

Corbin had a little incident this morning and he wanted to write a story about it.  He’s into making books lately.  So, here’s Corbin’s story.  Illustrated by him and written by me as he told it to me.  I might add my own commentary underneath the picturesWinking smile

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He insisted that this book have a title page.  Sure, why not have one for a 15 page book with no chapters or headings…makes sense, said no librarian ever!Winking smile

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Remember, I was writing what Corbin told me to write.  So, bear that in mind as you read some awkward word flow!

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I do love the descriptive word sharp he said.  And if you will note Dad is on the right and the dots are Dad running to get to Corbin, love!

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Corbin never really explains what got hurt, so I will.  He fell mouth first onto our wood floor and his teeth bit into his lip.  It was bloody and swollen.
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Hilarious…Daddy left.  Just like that he left.  I tried to get him to reword that or explain a bit more, but he was adamant that this is what the page should say.

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Ok, so where was I before this time? In the shower, getting ready for church.  I did hear the fall and I did hear the gut wrenching “hurt cry”.  But, I knew Daddy was out there and I knew that I might make the situation worse because I tend to freak out when people get hurt.  I also heard the water run so I knew there must have been blood…yuck!  So, I talked myself down from panic and knew that if it was really bad Chris would come get me, until then keep getting ready.

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This is his back cover….blood spots.  What do I even say to that…love being a boy momSmile

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